In a strangeland

More apartments but less houses

More roads but less pathways

They beg, but their eyes do not plead, they mock your conscience

Its not mercy here Mr! It’s business.

A poor old woman here and there to make you guilty for the coffee you just had.

You carry coins in your wallet but nothing to change a life.

They call it the dream city. Where dreams are cold.

They disappear in the noises of cars honking and people running.

More crowd but less people

Strangers are strangers, they remain strangers

In your land you knew strangers even.

Evenings come and go before you decide it was a lovely evening

More cafes, more restaurants, more night outs

But less conversations, less warmth, less feelings

Feed yourself on delicacies, but there’s no dinner to remember.

don’t smile

don’t walk too slow

don’t stop to look at the lovely tree

don’t say you don’t know

don’t thank

don’t wait for no-one

don’t be the first one

don’t help

your land was your blanket

now you are without it.

2 comments:

Unknown said...

Congratulations on your first poem. You underrate yourself as a writer. You should write more.
If not anything else, your works are very genuine.

Unknown said...

awsm feelings and great intent.the thoughts are so clearly expressed it has your scent great for a first.

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